Friday, September 24, 2010

Giffney Personal Writing

I waited nervously. Bang! There goes the gun. Everybody runs except for me then I sprinted off and rushed up to them like cheetahs. The crowd was roaring like lions and also my calf muscles felt as hard as an elephant knee. When the gun shot it sounded deadly. Then at the end I thought I was going to suffocate. But then I finally got into the finals. Then in the finals my whole family was proud of me when I sprinted like a cheetah. As I came through the finish line it felt like an eagle was looking at me like I was it’s pray. Also everybody said you came first Giffney you came first.

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